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Post  laiken on Wed Jul 17, 2013 12:33 am

Hello Hellbounders!

Me/Hobbies:
My name is Halo Keloer, I am 16 years old and life in the Nehterlands.
I finished school this year and I am going to study Psychology next year to become a shrink (My ultimate dream job!)
I myself am pretty hyperactive, since I need to drink lots of coffee to function XD
I am also really into music. I've been in a band for a year with my best friends. (paste this after youtube . com! /watch?v=B5wgFAlBFs0)
We split up after 1 year because of our different taste in music Razz.
I'm working on a solo project named Baran right now which is deadly failing right now X3
I truly love my guitars with all my heart, they're my precious little babies, especially my SG, who i built myself.
My hobbies are playing guitar, bassguitar, singing, reading manga's and watching anime

Mape History:
I heard found maplestory when it still was in its early beta's on some site like mmorpg.com or something like that.
I've been playing maplestory since 2005 on Global, but then I got hacked ;_;.
I switched to maplestory Europe in 2011 because of some friends of mine.
I've been lookin' for a good and social guild for a while and I think i just found it!

These are all my lovely chairs I collected!

Lotus Leaf Chair
Giant Yeti Chair
Navy Velvet
Sleepy Bird Chair
Storytime Chair

Guild History:
I've never played in guilds in Maplestory since I always played with 2 friends.
I think I can help the guild with services like setting up an TeamSpeak server, since I'm pretty usefull with computers.
I have played in guilds on other MMO's though like Guild Wars 2, I really liked it there.
I think HellBound is the right guild for me because I'm really social and love to help other people around.

My characters:
My main is MagicLaiken,Fire Poison mage (best class eva!) lvl 73
Mule1: laikenthief, thief, lvl 30
mule2: laikenx, Demon Avenger, lvl 29
mule3: laikenz, Kaiser, lvl 33
DragonLaiken
xXxLaikenxXx
Laikenpirate

My view on hacking/Duped Items:
I'm fully against duped items, using duped items is a sad way to play the game.
I also hate hacking alot because I have been hacked once on Maplestory Global and that just killed me!

I'm lookin' forward to play with you guys :3


Last edited by Stephy on Sun Jul 21, 2013 12:31 am; edited 11 times in total (Reason for editing : Needed to renew :3)
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Re: Laikens Application

Post  Jason on Wed Jul 17, 2013 12:34 am

Please redo your application. I won't say anymore. You probably won't want to hear it.

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Re: Laikens Application

Post  Guest on Wed Jul 17, 2013 12:39 am

I'm going to post the same thing I posted on another application we recently had seeing as I want to give you a chance Halo.
Go through this: http://www.hellboundems.com/t4334-guidelines-for-applying-to-hellbound
Also, try taking a look at some of the applications which have been accepted to give you a hint ^^
Sorry to make an example of you Jodie but this is undenaibly one of the best apps we've had in a while
http://www.hellboundems.com/t4968-chocobunnies-application-to-hellbound
It doesn't have to be as long but take a look at it to grasp some ideas.
Also make sure to come have a chat with us in hbfm (CH3 FM6) when you can. Please also include the levels of all your characters and mules as well as their names. I'd also like konow why you think HellBound id the right place for you.
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Re: Laikens Application

Post  Stephy on Fri Jul 19, 2013 11:06 am

You're a real good kid from what i saw,
Your trying to fit in and get into our talks.
Still the app is very poor,
Even after usher,jamie and i talked with you about it
And gave u so many tips.
Then after 9edits its still not what its needs to be. :/
Also i wanna mention, since or you ignored me in game,
U only mention3 chars while on your hellbanned tread u got many other chars,
Why dont u mention them?
Anyways i'm not gonna vote since i really don't know,
Your trying in game so that would mean a maybe yes,
But knowing we gaved u so much advice and the app still is poor i had to say no.
So stayin neutral and gonna let the other guys vote.

Goodluck halo.

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Re: Laikens Application

Post  laiken on Fri Jul 19, 2013 3:10 pm

Yeah thanks for the feedback and 6 times of the 9 were used to fix minor spelling issues
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Re: Laikens Application

Post  Jamie on Fri Jul 19, 2013 3:49 pm

i see you are trying very hard and even said you are not the best at writing apps, id say a trial as you seem like you really want to join and are hanging with us a lot in FM and its nice too see the eagerness Smile

but on the other hand as steph says we did tell you what to do quite a few times and there was little improvement each time you edited :/. id still say maybe you deserve a trial

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Re: Laikens Application

Post  Jason on Fri Jul 19, 2013 8:12 pm

Still not convinced to be honest. If you can't follow a set of instructions and advice from our guildies on making a simple application then I don't see that changing if you join us. My opinion anyway. Prove me wrong.

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Post  HoliArcher on Fri Jul 19, 2013 9:24 pm

The application is just so poor for 9 edits like Stephie said. No because of the english, it is just too poor...

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Re: Laikens Application

Post  Destabilise on Fri Jul 19, 2013 11:40 pm

App may be poor, but he's joining in on Tinychat and stuff all the time, which definitely shows dedication to joining this guild, if you ask me.

Might want to do another attempt to improve your app (look at the tips given) to convince the other people. But as long as nothing bad pops up, it's a yes from me.

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Post  MrFuzzums on Sat Jul 20, 2013 2:09 am

To be honest I like the dude, seemed cheery and nice overall on tinychat. Yes for trial from me.

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Post  Guest on Sat Jul 20, 2013 2:31 am

What Steph's said is still out standing. If I've understood what she's said correctly, you have more than 3 characters. She knows this because she's dug up your request for an Un-Hellban on the EMS forums. Why've you not initially included those characters on your application ? Would you mind ssing your character log in screen where you'd normally see all of your characters ? Thanks.

Moving on however, his app wasn't the best, but the sheer fact he's even gone through the trouble to edit it 9 times says just about enough. He's active, already learning our names, has been in hbfm every day since he applied and is with us on tiny chat when we're there nearly every evening. Post that ss, include any extra characters, don't call me remni Smile6 ...and you've my yes vote.
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Post  GhoulScout on Sat Jul 20, 2013 12:05 pm

Reminiscing wrote:What Steph's said is still out standing. If I've understood what she's said correctly, you have more than 3 characters. She knows this because she's dug up your request for an Un-Hellban on the EMS forums. Why've you not initially included those characters on your application ? Would you mind ssing your character log in screen where you'd normally see all of your characters ? Thanks.

You seem like a nice kid, but id also like to see this.
If you feel uncomfortable posting it on a forum then you can send it to me in a PM.

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Here are the characters

Post  laiken on Sat Jul 20, 2013 3:52 pm

Here you go!
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Re: Laikens Application

Post  BlazeHermit on Sun Jul 21, 2013 12:21 am

Being racist isn't something that we take lightly. You've upset one of our members with your racist comments.
Closing the application and personally denying you.

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